tritina
A “tritina” style of poem is a contraction of the sestina to three stanzas of three lines (tercets), with a one-line envoy. The order of the line-ending words follows the same pattern as that of the sestina, so that they appear: 123, 312, 231 with the envoy as 123.
That night was impolite,
for it led to thinking in a manner,knotted
for my thoughts were the night’s colour, livid.
Regretful actions take place in a state of livid.
Introspective actions take place in a night impolite.
Revengeful actions take place in a way knotted.
A wish to not be knotted.
a few years since that night,born out of my livid,
but life is not a wish granting factory, it is impolite.
Because , they die with me, my impolite,knotted and livid.
you wrote this poem following some rules?
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Yes , it is a tritina poem ! Google it !
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you know how to write a haiku?
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I have not tried haiku ! Maybe i will give it a try!
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I once was very fond of haiku.Now i lost the touch.
Three lines,first line 5 syllables,second line 7 syllables and third line again 5 syllables.
The third line is the best of haiku should be a surprising one,
From time to time
The clouds give rest
To the moon-beholders.
– Matsuo Bashō
Got it?
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Mainly haiku are abut nature and season.but i believe we can write on anything.This was the one i liked very much from my haiku-
Tempting me to touch,
Tiny blossomed flowers on,
Both her smiling cheeks.
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That is nice! !
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NICE 🙂
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Interestingly thought provoking. Well done!
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Thanks! ! 🙂
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That’s a very interesting style, I learnt something today. It’s beautiful how you expressed with the restriction, and it does sound rhythmic. Really enjoyed it!
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Hii thankyou ! That is very kind of you!
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Wow. This is a tough poem to write but you nailed it! Great job! 🙂
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Hey, thankyou soo much! Means alot!
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I mean it. 🙂
And thank you for liking my posts, Mukthi. 🙂
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Some stuff on my blog. I guess you’re gonna like it.
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that was really good….u introduced a new form to me…..and surely with the best example possible…..looking forward to write a tritina myself…..
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Thankyou soo much! 🙂 glad i could be of help! Cannot wait to read your tritina
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you’re welcome…. yeah just seeking a subject for the same
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Wow, you know so much about poetry! I need to educate myself more, now I seem to just slap things down and hope for the best (really selling my stuff there) but honestly, this poem was amazing. Sublime writing, I can’t wait to read more of your amazing works x
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Hello,
Thankyou soo much! You are very kind! 🙂
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You’re welcome x
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Just loved it!!!
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glad !! thankyou!!
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pleasure
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